I am standing in the middle of the cold dark room it is silent it sends a shiver down my spine then I hear whispering and its coming from upstairs should I go up and see what is making those whispering? I walk up to the stars. They scream really loudly. It smells like somebody died here so long ago then the lights start flickering and I am feeling scared is this place haunted? then there is a loud scream I run down the stairs then I see a skeleton living there the face is sad like something killed it but then I see a knife in it and then the eyes that are still there look at me at it says run for your life she is coming for your soul I run out like bolt lightning and never go in there again.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 21 October 2020
a moment in time
Hi bloggers, today I am going to share my story. It took a while to think of what to write but I looked at the picture, and it looked scary so I write something scary. It isn't very long but I put a lot of hard work and it took ,a long time to write something so I hope that you like my story blog you later .😁
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